Changes from my film review

 I was fortunate enough to only get good criticism from my friends. I did, however, find a few things I didn't like about the film. It was mostly the transitions that I didn't like. All I really had to do was hit a couple buttons In order to fix this problem. I had to find the part of the footage where the transition occurred, and use what I had there over the transition. The way I had this done, is that the transitions were embedded in the film. The first one occurs where the camera zooms into the back of the main character's head, before zooming out on him walking upstairs, through the head. The first part of the transition is in black and white, but the second is in color. The way I had it before, the color of his hair started showing before it was fully zoomed in. It was just a little sloppy, which I was able to fix. It now looks good. The next transition was at the end of the second scene,  where it reverts back to black and white from color. This happens as the camera pans white, and gets cut off by a wall. From the wall, it moves back into the scene at hand, outside of the flashback/cutaway. Again, this was nothing more than sloppy timing on my part. It took about 3 seconds to fix it, and then I was happy. The last thing I wanted to change was the arrangement of the words on the title title card. This wasn't a big issue, as all I had to do was take the text and recenter it. These were the only changes I had to make, and they were by my own fruition.